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Modified n2020.txt from [077a62b82b] to [02dc025cf2].
1276 1276 1277 1277 How does Alley's path shift after priority updates due to the risk 1278 1278 tolerance profile change? How will she meet the black war veteran and 1279 1279 Carmen plus Cliff again later? I kinda feel like she should. Maybe she 1280 1280 should meet the girl from the first kid's car, too, but probably not the 1281 1281 kid himself again. 1282 1282 1283 + Maybe the black war veteran former Army Ranger tough guy shows up again as 1284 + a service provider, with her as a customer, when later she needs to be 1285 + transported surreptitiously and clandestinely from one place to another, 1286 + equivalent to what's going on with similar scenarios in other stories out 1287 + there. This could be a good way to get him back into the story and in 1288 + contact with her. She could also, then, end up having the opportunity to 1289 + pay him back the twenty dollars he doesn't even realize she owes him. 1290 + 1291 + Perhaps something Alley could do for one of the other study participants is 1292 + do reasearch on people who are trying to find a particular issue of a 1293 + particular comic book series to complete a collection, because maybe this 1294 + other study participant is in need of money and has a comic book in 1295 + excellent condition that could bring in some money like that. Should Alley 1296 + end up charging the guy then, when the guy talks to the potential buyer, 1297 + the deal falls through, leaving the guy with no money to speak of, and in 1298 + fact with less than when he started because he had to pay Alley? Will this 1299 + be a case where Alley pays the guy back, because even if she did the work 1300 + she realizes the guy is in financial trouble and needs the money, and part 1301 + of the reason he's in such financial trouble is that the research he paid 1302 + her to perform -- though effective and well completed for him -- did not 1303 + actually bear fruit for him? Is there some possibility this will turn out 1304 + to be bad for one or both of them if it gets back to the professor and his 1305 + spooky spook government intelligence contractors that the prioritizer is 1306 + cross pollenating a bit between study participants that should be kept 1307 + separate from each other? 1308 + 1309 + Will Alley end up running a courier job on a motorcycle? That seems fun. 1310 + 1311 + Will Alley have to bail some guy out of jail? Perhaps a criminal of some 1312 + kind, wanted by the police, has the money to bail out a co conspirator 1313 + needs someone else to go in to pay the bail -- someone who is not wanted by 1314 + the police, and thus can get away with it. That would be fun. The 1315 + question is really how I should arrange for her to do this *before* she 1316 + ends up on the lam, because afterward she's probably a bit afraid to go 1317 + into a police station. Perhaps the criminal paying for things has some 1318 + half crippled old lady (or perhaps the half crippled old lady *is* the 1319 + criminal!) talk her into paying the bail for her poor grandson or whatever 1320 + the hell he is. That could be extra fun, of course. Now I just need an 1321 + excuse for Alley to have to pay the bail under her own name instead of 1322 + delivering payment for the half crippled old lady or something like that. 1323 + Hell, maybe she (the old lady) pretends she is afraid of being on camera 1324 + because the government is full of horrible people who will do bad things 1325 + with the video, or to her, or whatever. Maybe she's afraid of being sent 1326 + to a nursing home that is almost prisonlike in how it runs things, 1327 + according to the old lady's sob story. 1328 + 1329 + Maybe the lawyer of some crime boss is just arranging her to carry the 1330 + payment down there and pay the bail as a courier, thus the motorcycle 1331 + courier job. That seems like the most likely scenario so far, but very far 1332 + from the most fun. If she does it with a motorcycle, though, that means 1333 + she's doing it after she's on the lam, I think, which means I have to 1334 + figure out how to get her to be willing to go to the place to pay bail. 1335 + That might be a bit harder. 1336 + 1337 +*/ 1338 + 1339 +/* 1340 + 1341 +Maybe Alley could go to a doctor to get a prescription for something that she can then sell to others as a way to make money. This is obviously illegal. It should probably only come up after she ends up on the run because of the people coming to her home and thus scaring her off. 1342 + 1343 +Maybe Alley could just carry drugs for someone. Again, this is pretty sketchy, and is probably not appropriate right now. 1344 + 1345 +*/ 1346 + 1347 +/* 1348 + 1349 +SUMMARY: 1350 + 1351 +Alley should, after discussing plans with the prioritizer for what they'll do next, get up the next day and have to deal with the arrival of scary people with sunglasses who want to talk to her about the fact the prioritizer is not properly logging her activities the way they expect. They want to know what's going on, and get a bit of a "conversation" with the prioritizer through her interface or something like that. They should probably check out the glasses just to make sure there's nothing fishy going on with them such that they might somehow be preventing the prioritizer from properly capturing data and detecting activity and so on. They should probably intimate that she will potentially lose her study participation payments if she doesn't allow the prioritizer further into her life to log everything she's doing and provide material they can use to analyze stuff about her and so on. 1352 + 1353 +A reason for this visit is, of course, the way the prioritizer has been redacting logs to keep activities in line with Alley's goal of greater personal and digital privacy inher life, protecting her from intrusive shit from police and other law enforcement things, and others as well. 1354 + 1283 1355 */ 1284 1356 1285 1357 /* 1286 1358 1287 1359 At some point, she should set up a meeting for an exchange in a private conference room at a co-working space. Someone should recognize her and ask whether she's meeting a client, to which she replies vaguely in a positively interpretable fashion without literally confirming that assumption with her words. 1288 1360 1289 1361 I wanted the person who greets her to say something that raises some factoid of her life, but I'm not sure any longer what I had in mind. Did it have anything to do with getting out of Dalton's shadow?